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Original Award Examples

Enlisted Recognition Program (Airman of the Quarter 2nd)
(Air Force Reserve)

Award Cat: Amn
Winner: ?






Key Points to Writing
  • WRITE!!! The more you do it, the better you get.
  • Ask for HELP, the only person looking out for #1 is you.
  • The only person looking out for your troops is YOU!
  • Use a spell checker.  F7 works real fast in MS Word.
  • Use various writing resources like Merriam-Webster Online to improve your vocabulary.

The following example has been taken out of a IMT document.  I have changed mission information to protect myself and the people I have received the information from.  I will attempt to give a little insight to the entire process if I know it.

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LEADERSHIP AND JOB PERFORMANCE IN PRIMARY DUTY: 
LEADERSHIP AND JOB PERFORMANCE IN PRIMARY DUTY:
- Outstanding team player! Apprentice technician at the ###th Job Control helpdesk; motivated Self Starter!
-- Efficiently reinstalled required software to 2 mission critical laptops; ensuring important comm capability
-- Proficiently recovered inoperable Windows system in minimal time; maintaining resource capacity
-- Identified/resolved UTAPS printer problem for ## ARS personnel; allowing all key documents to be printed
-- Maintained Wing mission by quickly restoring user capabilities to network; resetting 38 user passwords
-- Quickly released 18 computers from quarantine in minimal time; allowing access to AF network/documents
-- Expertly deployed new critical computer system to the ###th AMDS 1st Sergeant; enhancing capabilities
--Key player in winning AFRC's "Communication and Information General Edwin W. Rawlings Team Award"
- Selflessly volunteered to provide support to the ###th ABS, Moron, Spain as part of the Air Expeditionary Force rotation; Members job knowledge and initiative proved to be an invaluable asset to local leadership
-- Ensured 100% compliance to USAF email naming standard; flawlessly updating 750+ Exchange mailboxes
-- Persistently deleted obsolete user profiles due to high Base turnover; efforts maintained mission continuity
-- Expertly removed unauthorized software from 100+ systems; ensuring USAF compliance basewide
-- Skillfully edited Moron AB logon script to correctly map network drives for entire ### ABG; allowing all members the opportunity to access mission essential information on network drives; knowledge benefitting all!
-- Adeptly executed the restructure of security permissions on two file servers; allowing accurate authorization
-- Standardized and documented account creation process;improved training capabilities/increasing production
-- Logged 125+ jobs in Remedy during deployment; allowing timely solutions\little disruption of service
- Unselfishly volunteers time, energy, and effort to help promote the benefits and importance of physical fitness as the Unit fitness monitor; This critical need profits all members in this era of a Fit to Fight Air Force
- Significantly advanced units fitness program by employing spreadsheet documentation and scheduled training

SIGNIFICANT SELF-IMPROVEMENT:
- Devoted to learning! Seizes all educational opportunities to further advance his professional career field
-- Currently enrolled in Air Force Airman Leadership Correspondence Course; off-duty dedication to learning!
-- Advanced career/Air Force knowledge by attending Microsoft Exchange/ Server classes on personal time
-- Actively enrolled and diligently pursuing the Air Force's "3C0 - Initial Qualification Training"
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- Promoting/endorsing physical fitness;enthusiastically participates in Physical Training on UTA/personal time

BASE OR COMMUNITY INVOLVEMENT:
- Faithfully volunteers to assist in parties, sports day, and fund raising activities at <NAME> Drive Elementary
- Selflessly gives time to Good Hope Baptist Church; Volunteers and councils at Home for pregnant teenagers
- Actively helps neighbors in trimming trees, fixing plumbing/electrical problems, and home improvements
-Donated clothes, household items, and furniture to Salvation Army and Goodwill Industries, helping the homeless and low-income families. Never missing an opportunity to give back to his community.
- Actively promotes/supports base establishments thru their usage; sets the example for young airman to follow
 

NOTE:

  As you can see this award looks really bad, the only thing I have done is remove identifying squadron/wing info.  Follow the initial email thread to the completed submitted award

 


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